Wednesday, June 23, 2010

Wednesday One Shots for 6/23/10


Maelyn recommends Defaulted Love by LondonMarie
It's Bella and Edward's wedding. What can go wrong? Is Jacob the only threat to their wedded bliss or is there something or someone else who can destroy everything? What would James say? Bella/James Rated M

This fic is quite OOC, but I enjoyed reading it.  I do wish there were a little more ‘filling’, as some of the parts seemed a little fast, but it was still good and I liked it. 

I love the beginning how she’s dreaming of what started it all with James only to be woken on her wedding day by Alice.  Bella is almost apathetic about her wedding, but has this dream of her memory of James, which brings him to mind.  You get a glimpse of her sadness at his loss.

Later, she’s talking to Jake, who is again pressuring her to leave Edward.  I love her thoughts as she’s talking to him.  And once she lies and tells him how she’s not running, he leaves and James appears.

What ensues is awesome and I even laughed and called out “Yeah!” while reading it.  So go see what happens!

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